1.1 --- a/en/collab.tex	Fri Aug 31 11:15:18 2007 +0200
     1.2 +++ b/en/collab.tex	Sun Aug 31 12:14:23 2008 -0400
     1.3 @@ -461,7 +461,7 @@
     1.4  take a look at your system documentation to figure out how to install
     1.5  it.
     1.6  
     1.7 -On Windows, you'll first need to choose download a suitable ssh
     1.8 +On Windows, you'll first need to download a suitable ssh
     1.9  client.  There are two alternatives.
    1.10  \begin{itemize}
    1.11  \item Simon Tatham's excellent PuTTY package~\cite{web:putty} provides
    1.12 @@ -495,7 +495,7 @@
    1.13  
    1.14  When you generate a key pair, it's usually \emph{highly} advisable to
    1.15  protect it with a passphrase.  (The only time that you might not want
    1.16 -to do this id when you're using the ssh protocol for automated tasks
    1.17 +to do this is when you're using the ssh protocol for automated tasks
    1.18  on a secure network.)
    1.19  
    1.20  Simply generating a key pair isn't enough, however.  You'll need to
    1.21 @@ -737,7 +737,7 @@
    1.22  named something like \dirname{public\_html} in their home directory,
    1.23  from which they can serve up web pages.  A file named \filename{foo}
    1.24  in this directory will be accessible at a URL of the form
    1.25 -\texttt{http://www.example.com/\~username/foo}.
    1.26 +\texttt{http://www.example.com/\~{}username/foo}.
    1.27  
    1.28  To get started, find the \sfilename{hgweb.cgi} script that should be
    1.29  present in your Mercurial installation.  If you can't quickly find a